Even better reading it a second time, I read this before on another site. Still good, so good i had to read it again. Love the story development.
great, this is what you'd expect from the characters attributes, perfect.
i like the character uniqueness
might as well turn everyone who fucked Ryo into a chick to make it even else this chapter was fucking dumb. Viral infection means that shut spread, yeah dudes a female now that's great, but if everyone dude who hit ain't get infected either shit stupid. the one muthafucker who's Ryo friend didn't get infected now if he doesn't get it from Ryo wtf happened then. Might as well scrap this shit if it don't make sense.
4/10 the art is fine the plot a.k.a setup trash i know its hypnosis but come on just throwing the shit in there. It the first one the author didn't even explain how they hypnotized everyone, they just all brainwashed. Also its a Ntr tag but come'on after the dudes bitches get screwed the bf's ain't hitting it wtf. I could see if the bf's hit it but they females were like the counselor is way better but come'on. I couldn't even get a half chub off this, i seen better in manga with surprise nudity. I read all the other chapters and really expected more but all i got was shit & trash. The only thing credible is the art style but it couldn't hold mt interest. I've seen better.
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really messed up
like where this going
ntr is meant to fuel emotions and arousal but i didn't even get a boner off this cheap story i critique this as a fail 84 pages of fail
trash plot seen it coming old dude a straight bitch
so she got raped because of her friend and a misunderstanding, but lets bs the plot........? she loves it the fuck outta here with that fake ass shit!!
outta all the character fuckboi satake his bitchass really?
story author kill yourself you have no talent in creative writting you jack A$$
if you wanted to make a shit story do it on your lonely blog if you got one i hate shit doujin plots the most........art good story trash that especially pissed me off good art but shit story.....why even upload the shit then fuckin dammit
the events unfolded quick but orderly
wasn't bad
i'd punch the daylights out of his sister

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