just a few pages in i knew something is not right. - a kid wouldn't normally think that much, excessive thought inputs. - introduction of onee san totally throws immersion out of the fucking window - what do you mean a male kid around 8-10 years old, knows what tomboy and feminity is??? (protagonist could have just know onee san's family name or something for realism as well, not her first name, things like these are basic writing really) - awkward smile from onee san after she protected protagonist for the first time in this work.
one of the better ones for this style, why do they not have a name/genre for these style of h-manga? like the characters kept on moving within the same background used for several pages.
also me when i get the reference:
that's naoki yamamoto for ya
- a kid wouldn't normally think that much, excessive thought inputs.
- introduction of onee san totally throws immersion out of the fucking window - what do you mean a male kid around 8-10 years old, knows what tomboy and feminity is??? (protagonist could have just know onee san's family name or something for realism as well, not her first name, things like these are basic writing really)
- awkward smile from onee san after she protected protagonist for the first time in this work.
really solid too even when there is comedy
very highly dependent on the writing and contents.