Nice, wish it was the oldest bro, cause I can't stand that little brat. Love how hot she became towards the end. Sure she was still hot at the start, but damn she became like a goddess at the end.
Halo? Nice try Hal. You'll never trick me again in to reading another one of your twisted stories. And I remember reading this a long time ago as the first of Hal's works that I read. Over all it good compared to the rest.
It's okay, but there was room for so much more. A male hero in a train surrounded by mind controlled women, and two female villains. Was there even any exposed breast?
I hope the wife ran away, and was a bitch instead of being good, and dying. Makes the story more good. Makes the daughter more mature personality wise. Plus daughter of the fucking year.
You monster. And not in a DBZ Broly Abridged way.