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Phartsalot on
Need in English... PLEASE!!!!!!
Phartsalot on Catch and Release / Catch あんどリリース
WOOOOT!!!!! I need a NEESAMA like that!!!
Phartsalot on Hello My Pretty Baby / ハロー・マイ・プリティ・ベビー
Ok... Everyone who read this face forward and look to the right...
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There is a wall...
And that's all I got to say about that...
Phartsalot on I Am Everyone's Landlord / ボクは皆の管理人
Definitely need to rename this one, "Every Man's Biggest Dream." Awesome story. Great art work to. Ten Billion Trillion Quadrillion stars.
Phartsalot on HHH Triple H / HHH トリプルエッチ♥
Artwork is terrible. Girls look like they have big balls instead of a pussy when in a swimsuit or panties. Needs to learn camel toe.
Phartsalot on Hajirai Body / 恥じらいBody
This is by far the best I have read. The 3 story lines, the art work, all of it so awesome. There is actually a plot, a story. It's easy to tell who is speaking and who is doing what. I wish I could give a hundred stars... Though, I still wish they would separate the different arcs.
Phartsalot on Chichi Iro Toiki / 乳色吐息
I wish like hell they would separate the stories. That Love Square Panic really sucked. I wound up ditching the rest of this one by the 3rd chapter. Ruined the rest of them.
Phartsalot on Happy Sex Education / たのしい保健体育
Where do I sign up for that kind of sex education????
Phartsalot on Watashi no, Onii-chan 4.5 Bangaihen / 私の、お兄ちゃん4.5 番外編
I didn't get it, especially since the two girls were identical. The story made no sense.
Phartsalot on
Gawwd I HATE the way they do these now. It used to be you know who was talking because the conversation balloon had a pointer. Now I have to watch for adverbs. Who is Ririchyo-sama (sama is used for a person of great importance)? The girl? The butler? The story was IMPOSSIBLE to follow. It started out it looked like the butler was being made to watch his mistress masturbate. It looked like she was calling out Ririchyosama, then it looks like he is calling her that, then her friends are calling him that, then her friends... Usually there is some type of indicator of a flashback or time shift in story. I thought it would turn into a love story from there, but then the girl's friends show up, and the story is totally lost from there. ZERO stars. NO recommendations.
Phartsalot on Hatsujou Souchi / 発情装置
I hate when they don't separate storylines. There are a few I would have rated 4 stars, but because of the bad ones and the worst artwork that I've ever seen, the rating dropped to only 1 star. I wish I could have given it half. I'm serious about the artwork. Three year olds do a better job. I couldn't tell what I was looking at over half the time... just squiggly lines and odd shapes. Like I said, there were a few stories so bad, it brought down all of them. The others were fantastic though, if only the art work was good. Even the bad ones may have been passable if they had decent artwork.
Phartsalot on Murakumo Gurui Kai Ni / ムラクモグルイ改二
Too bad I can't rate 0 stars. There is absolutely no story here. No plot. I think they were trying to go for a military/secretary theme, but boy did they mess that up. The worst writing that I've ever seen. Nothing made sense.
Phartsalot on UMA -Umasashi- / UMA -馬挿し-
I HAD to give this a very low rating. By page 100, the broken record had worn me out. I was getting nauseated. I went on and finished, hoping to find the story develop, but it never did. It was just the same thing repeating over and over and over, nothing new. The art work is the best, I loved it, but like I said, it started out with a good story that really had my interest, but then it just repeats the same thing over and over. Stop at about page 30.
Phartsalot on Lusty ☆ Sister Trap / 欲情☆姉TRAP
This would be good if there was any artwork. There is so much drawn that you can't make heads or tales of anything. The story itself gets 5 stars, but the artwork gets half a star.

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