>>1062528 @ Daddy's Dick I agree with you man, self cucking kinda goes against what NTR stands for with me. Like, NTR is at it's best when something is forcibly taken. I'd term this more like freely given instead of taken lmao.
And what you wrote could be a pretty good start to a NTR! I'd really enjoy seeing a story progress down that road tbh. But for this story instead of having it be Mom/Stranger and the Dad/Son getting NTR'd, maybe have it be Mom/Son and the Dad getting NTR'd. Having the son being the rapist would add the moral pressure really needed to both the mom and dad, the mom obviously wants to "save" her son so she forces the dad to be passive in the interm. You could keep the same progression but just change that, bam: we get a passable NTR.
This is the type of shit that really should've ended with a knife in the dumb criminal's throat and the mom's stomach. I love Moral Degradation but the true end for this material isn't "My mom is a whore now" it's "I killed my whore mother".
Also, I think another thing that has me not liking this story is just how weird it is. Typically there's a source of pressure in these stories in order to break the moral target, such as paying off a debt or societal pressure. In this one it's just "Despite me being a hard trained corrections officer and this being my job for multiple years, just now this one criminal is too domineering". Which this type of story would make sense if the criminal drugged her, but there's no mention of something like that happening. You can't have a strong will character with a high sense of justice and familial integrity just suddenly go "today's the day I simply change".
Idk man, this shit is just weird. I still jacked off, but only to a few specific scenes and not the actual story. A good wank should leave me going "yeah, okay I see that happening" even if the story is absurd. This one just had a bad story that felt like the ending was written first.
I hate Neotare like this, I mean I still jack off to it but it just makes me mad afterwards. Have the MC snap, don't make them act like fucking stale crackers after something like this has happened to them.
Good. Many authors tend to have characters split up after getting cucked, but this guy gets the true appeal. If the couple basically splits up then it isn't cuckolding. The couple has to affirm their love and stay together while the cuckolding is happening.
I always like these semisweet stories. There's an obvious perversion going on and you know the contents of the story are slightly messed up (such as fucking a younger cousin while he wears essentially a dress whilst the rest of the family is right next door). But the perversion is half the story, the other half is two people falling in love. Sounds gay, I know.
When people imagine Lust, they always paint it along with shades of Envy and Greed, even sometimes Wrath. But Lust works best with it's antithesis; Love.
Idk. I love traps and fanboys so. More trap content is always good content.
So we're all just gonna ignore the fact that the author sees the futa impregnator in their dreams? Fucking RIP to Author, I hope you don't get dream raped.
I agree with you man, self cucking kinda goes against what NTR stands for with me. Like, NTR is at it's best when something is forcibly taken. I'd term this more like freely given instead of taken lmao.
And what you wrote could be a pretty good start to a NTR! I'd really enjoy seeing a story progress down that road tbh. But for this story instead of having it be Mom/Stranger and the Dad/Son getting NTR'd, maybe have it be Mom/Son and the Dad getting NTR'd. Having the son being the rapist would add the moral pressure really needed to both the mom and dad, the mom obviously wants to "save" her son so she forces the dad to be passive in the interm. You could keep the same progression but just change that, bam: we get a passable NTR.
Also, I think another thing that has me not liking this story is just how weird it is. Typically there's a source of pressure in these stories in order to break the moral target, such as paying off a debt or societal pressure. In this one it's just "Despite me being a hard trained corrections officer and this being my job for multiple years, just now this one criminal is too domineering". Which this type of story would make sense if the criminal drugged her, but there's no mention of something like that happening. You can't have a strong will character with a high sense of justice and familial integrity just suddenly go "today's the day I simply change".
Idk man, this shit is just weird. I still jacked off, but only to a few specific scenes and not the actual story. A good wank should leave me going "yeah, okay I see that happening" even if the story is absurd. This one just had a bad story that felt like the ending was written first.
When people imagine Lust, they always paint it along with shades of Envy and Greed, even sometimes Wrath. But Lust works best with it's antithesis; Love.
Idk. I love traps and fanboys so. More trap content is always good content.