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DirtyDiamondback on There's No Such Thing As Hypxxxsis / 催眠術なんてあるわけない
Yo, that dude looked like he was pressing his fingers into her brain, his fingers sunk that deep.
DirtyDiamondback on Lady Slave Of The Horse / 馬辱夫人
Yikes.

Horse's dick is anatomically incorrect and the plot is a simplistic mess.
DirtyDiamondback on Volunteer Breeding / ヴォランティア・ブリーディング
The plot leaves more questions than answers, and feels incoherent. It's trying to convey the state of society but it lacks the exposition necessary to bind it all together (i.e. the mom's origin feels vague and poorly explained, and it doesn't mesh well with the plot). Also, the time skip breaks the pacing. Easily a 3/5.
DirtyDiamondback on Ninyousei no Takai 7-tsu Shita no Imouto to Futarime o Kosaeru Hon / 妊孕性の高い7つ下の妹と2人めを拵える本
>>1094000 @ Anonymous212307
It technically is, since Page 32 starts over but with the sister drenched throughout.
DirtyDiamondback on Wifeout / 猥婦アウト
The biggest inconsistency these NTR stories have when the guy vanishes is that they never establish him keeping tabs on her when she and her husband move to another place. It's a cliche plot hole that they always leave for the reader to fill in themselves, similar to the plot holes of the Star Wars sequel trilogy. It's highly unrealistic for the guy to just show up out of the blue without establishing how he knew where she moved to. A plausible explanation would've served the story better.
DirtyDiamondback on Bestiary 3 / Bestiary 3
I hope the first two volumes get translated as well. It's possible to find both in complete form but they're both still fully in Japanese.
DirtyDiamondback on Seijuu Kyoushi ~Boshi Haramase no Niku Wana~ / 性獣教師 ～母子孕ませの肉罠～
The artwork seems a bit inconsistent. It's not Nico Pun Nise-level of bad, but it's not good all the same and detracts from the story.
DirtyDiamondback on Marriage In Paradise / 楽園のマリアージュ
"The most unrealistic thing here is that they saved themselves for marriage. "

That is the biggest load of crap I've read from any translator on this site.
DirtyDiamondback on Oba-san no Karada ga Kimochi Yosugiru kara <<Kouhen>> ~Boku no Oba-san wa Chou Meiki Datta~ / おばさんの肉体が気持ち良過ぎるから《後編》 ～ボクのおばさんは超名器だった～
>>27803 @ Anonymous
I know, right? I thought the writing sucked for the kid, and making the aunt into a doormat made it even worse.

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