Well, another bad rewrite by olddog51, but this one is a skoach better than his normal work... there was actually some dialogue to a story - few and far between, but one or two actual lines.
This is the last episode of this series I'll be reading. I really enjoyed it up until 3, but now, I'm just sick of it - boy who doesn't listen, and mother who won't reign him in - so unrealistic - too unbelievable or unenjoyable.
>>43887 @ Anonymous Yeah, same here. I stopped when I saw 6 dicks in her face, and just skipped to back here. It started off as such a nice story, and I was really into it.
I think it would have been funny as hell, since he dated mamma in college, if mamma would have told him that he just came in his daughter.... I know, I'm so sick...
I just hate rewrites. The wannabe writers have no imagination. I've only read 2 rewrites that were decent, well one was better than original, but this one sucked so bad, it is ranked below the worst list.
Yeah, same here. I stopped when I saw 6 dicks in her face, and just skipped to back here. It started off as such a nice story, and I was really into it.
Someone, please answer me this: Where can I go to learn to fly using farts????