I just HAAAAAD to favorite this one....
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I love that last line... I don't know about you, but I'd be backing off....
<3 love stories....
Confusing. I thought they were at his place, but looks like not. And I don't know which name went with who.
Would have been better without all of the "WAIT"ing.
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Well, another bad rewrite by olddog51, but this one is a skoach better than his normal work... there was actually some dialogue to a story - few and far between, but one or two actual lines.
Good story, almost every guy's dream... too bad the artwork sucked.
I love love stories...
Hmm... Did I read wrong, or were all of the girls 11? Loved this. Gave 3 thumbs up...
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Awesome. I want her...
This is the last episode of this series I'll be reading. I really enjoyed it up until 3, but now, I'm just sick of it - boy who doesn't listen, and mother who won't reign him in - so unrealistic - too unbelievable or unenjoyable.
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Yeah, same here. I stopped when I saw 6 dicks in her face, and just skipped to back here. It started off as such a nice story, and I was really into it.
I gave it three thumbs up....
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Another failed rewrite by olddog51.
I think it would have been funny as hell, since he dated mamma in college, if mamma would have told him that he just came in his daughter.... I know, I'm so sick...
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Another badly written rewrite... No imagination. The story idea was good, just poor poor writing killed it.
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I just hate rewrites. The wannabe writers have no imagination. I've only read 2 rewrites that were decent, well one was better than original, but this one sucked so bad, it is ranked below the worst list.
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Balls to the walls boys!!! We have an ins winner...
Baby Batter! Love it!!!
Er, was there a story? I didn't get anything... This is one of the worst things I've ever looked at, as NOTHING made any sense...
Okay, no story, no nothing except good comedy on first couple of pages.
Someone, please answer me this: Where can I go to learn to fly using farts????
I just had a total diabetic attack.... So cute....
Artwork was pretty bad, but the story more than made up for it, thought the writing could use a little brushing up to.
I've seen the animation of this one. Loved it. Can't believe I saw the animation before reading the doujinshi. Nice.
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That was about half-cocked... Needless to say, nothing but blanks...

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