>>46897 @ Pharuan Undearth What are you talking about? Yes, Phartsalot left out a couple of proper pronouns that generally start off a sentence, but that's common in today's speech. Otherwise his grammar is good, as well as perfect spelling. I could do without a couple of his expletives as well.
Now if you mean the anime, I couldn't agree with you more. I couldn't agree with the first comment more, either. I thought there was a story going one way, then it stops, and another one begins, then stops, then a totally different theme begins that tries to wrap in the first story, then that ends before even lifting off of the runway - talk about confusing. The author of this one must've been on LSD or meth when he wrote with this one... it has several beginnings that go nowhere. Granted, each one would make a wonderful story.
And I agree, there are several great authors out there that can talk dirty and get me very hot, wet, and horney using normal language. Speaking as a woman, foul language is not a turn on, but a sign of immaturity. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE dirty talk, and I don't mind an occasional foul word, but I prefer a mature mind over adolescent thinking. That's why I loathe American porn - no one knows how to talk. I've had plenty of sex, and never heard anything like that, and if I did, I'd shut it down, immediately and throw the imbecile, male or female (yes, I play both sides) to the curb. This one's a total turn off and I couldn't get wet from it either. Totes turned off.
What are you talking about? Yes, Phartsalot left out a couple of proper pronouns that generally start off a sentence, but that's common in today's speech. Otherwise his grammar is good, as well as perfect spelling. I could do without a couple of his expletives as well.
Now if you mean the anime, I couldn't agree with you more. I couldn't agree with the first comment more, either. I thought there was a story going one way, then it stops, and another one begins, then stops, then a totally different theme begins that tries to wrap in the first story, then that ends before even lifting off of the runway - talk about confusing. The author of this one must've been on LSD or meth when he wrote with this one... it has several beginnings that go nowhere. Granted, each one would make a wonderful story.
And I agree, there are several great authors out there that can talk dirty and get me very hot, wet, and horney using normal language. Speaking as a woman, foul language is not a turn on, but a sign of immaturity. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE dirty talk, and I don't mind an occasional foul word, but I prefer a mature mind over adolescent thinking. That's why I loathe American porn - no one knows how to talk. I've had plenty of sex, and never heard anything like that, and if I did, I'd shut it down, immediately and throw the imbecile, male or female (yes, I play both sides) to the curb. This one's a total turn off and I couldn't get wet from it either. Totes turned off.
I rike it!!! ;p