this would have been better as a multipart story, instead of a one-shot. I feel like you could probably have gotten 3 or 4 chapters out of this, and easily made more. it kinda gives me "H-ero Classroom" vibes.
I ignored the story. the art was pretty good. although why would somebody do that to someones childhood friend/love interest? even pushovers can snap and start killing people. sure they're big and muscley, but that wont mean shit if mc snuck up behind them with a knife or doused them in gasoline
the fat bastard literally admitted to being a rapist by not denying what she said. this video can be taken to the police and the shitty teacher would be arrested for rape and blackmail. not sure if that would help the girl much though, seeing as she's already been broke.
so wait, he's training the girl who has a crush on him and her friends to be better prostitutes...? or did I miss something due to fingering myself so hard?
He technically didn't kill her at the end since it seems the all died in the initial crash. Plus, wtf? There was no need to kill her, and wouldn't the daughter's friend be extremely scared of him after he done killed his own daughter?
I gave it a 3 star rating because I liked the first half and I really enjoyed the art. the second half ruined it for me not gonna lie. even though I was expecting the NTR and rape, it just sorta went from 10 to a 100 real quick. I was thinking maybe they caught the the brother and sister in the act and used that to blackmail her, but no, it was about the brother's porn charges. that doesn't even make sense, how much porn did he watch to rack up a bill high enough for them to "justify" claiming her as compensation? plus, she's a magical girl, she woulda just transformed and kicked their asses, secret identity or not.(oh wait, it's not real life, it's a dougin so it doesn't have to make sense)
Oop, I just realized that I said it was page83 when it's actually on page84. Lol
thnks for the heads up
do you remember what that light novel was called?
why yes, yes it is
cool, what's part 1 called?